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Shadow of the Overlord, Bonus Chapters 1 and 2

December 11, 2018 by Kevin Potter Leave a Comment

Today, I bring you 2 new chapters that were not part of the original draft. I would remind you again (as always, I’m sure it gets old, lol, but it bears repeating) that these are unedited, so will certainly contain typos and other mistakes that will not be present in the final version of the book. Enjoy!

Graumdor #1:

In a narrow ravine near the summit of the Spine of the World Mountains, a small semi-permanent community stood as a testament to the hardiness of Graumdor’s people. The huts were mostly composed of mud and straw with a bit of dung thrown in for mortar. At the center of the community a wide pit had been dug into the rocky soil to be used as a fighting arena.
Today, the day of all days, new recruits into the tribe’s military force fought to prove themselves worthy of full entrance into the ranks of soldiery and to be sorted into whatever rank they earn in the battles.
Two hulking men circled one-another in the pit, each wielding a fire-hardened spear of ash. The older of them thrust forward with his weapon but the other dodged to the left. The older man came up with the butt of the spear, slamming it into the younger man’s jaw and blood spurted from the man’s mouth.
Graumdor cringed. Did he truly want to do this? That could be him out there losing teeth in the competition that, in the scheme of things, really didn’t mean anything. Rank could be gained after their service began.
“It isn’t too late to back out of this foolishness,” Mother said from his side.
“Nonsense,” he replied immediately. “I am committed. This is my choice, Mother.”
She sighed.
He knew her feelings on the matter. The life of a warrior was not what she wanted for him. He had tried to walk the path she had chosen for him. He truly did. He just didn’t have it in him to live such a boring life. He needed action. He needed excitement. But more than anything, he craved conquest and battle.
Not that his puny arms were likely to lead him to that, but the musculature would come with training. Wouldn’t it?
Out in the pit, the older man thrust a knee into the other’s face, spurting more blood, then spun and slammed the haft of his spear into the back of the younger man’s head. He fell to the dirt and this time did not rise again.
“Victor!” Cried the Editor as he entered the pit again, then moved forward to raise the arm of the winner.
“Kraudish,” Graumdor growled. “He will be the one to defeat if I want top spot.”
Mother turned to him in horror. “No,” she breathed. “You cannot be serious. Look at the size of him. He will destroy you.”
He chuckled darkly. “Thank you for the vote of confidence, Mother.”
She frowned. “Just trying to be realistic, Son. You should not seek this man out.”
He shrugged. “It isn’t as though I have a choice in who I face. The Editor makes those decisions.”
Mother sighed. “True enough. Let us hope he makes choices that keep you alive.”
Graumdor shook his head in annoyance. Sometimes her lack of faith in his physical abilities was quite insulting. Though he was perfectly aware that he was not exactly the shining example of a burly man whose physique guaranteed a successful military career, he had something none of these other warriors did. He had learned to use his mind. He had studied tactics and strategies that few, if any, of the military were even aware of. Those strategies were what would carry him through to victory.
“Graumdor!” the Editor called. “You shall face Eklindiss. Both of you. Into the pit.” He turned and moved from the pit without waiting to see if the young men were coming to the pit. There was no need. No man of the tribe would shirk his duty and not come to the pit when called.
Shedding his cloak, Graumdor took the provided spear and moved toward the center of the pit. He was not familiar with Eklindiss, but assumed he would find out what sort of man he was being faced against in the first round.
When the other man emerged from the crowd on the other side of the pit, Graumdor struggled to hold in his shock. The Editor couldn’t be serious. How was he supposed to defeat this man?
Eklindiss was about his own height, but the man was built like an ogre. The man’s arms were bigger around than Graumdor’s thighs and his strongly built chest was almost twice as wide as Graumdor’s.
Gritting his teeth, Graumdor cleared his mind and closed his eyes. He needed to focus. He needed to center himself. Calm assessment and planning would see him through this. There was always a way, he only needed to find it.
Opening his eyes, he watched the way the man moved, analyzing him. He moved slowly, though that was probably an affectation. He watched the man’s movements as he took hold of the proffered spear and twirled it in his hands. The big man was confident in his abilities and was skilled with the weapon, that much was clear.
Okay, Graumdor thought. He has to have a weakness of some sort. There has to be a way to defeat him. I just need to find it.
He stepped forward to the starting position and waiting for the hulking man to stop across from him.
Eklindiss flashed a wicked grin. “Quit now while you’re ahead, Scholar,” he twisted the final word as though it were a curse. “No one will think less of you. Just quit. Go back to what you’re good at and leave war to those who have the stomach for it.”
Graumdor clenched his teeth in frustration. The warrior’s words came much too close to mirroring his thoughts for comfort. “Don’t worry,” he said with as much false bravado as he could muster. “I’ll try not to make your defeat too humiliating. It will be bad enough being defeated by me, of course, but I’ll make sure I don’t beat you too badly.”
Eklindiss snarled in fury, but held his position. He turned to the Editor, his lips twisted in fury.
The Editor nodded. “Begin!” he shouted.
Without delay, Eklindiss rose his spear and leaped for Graumdor, a word of fury escaping his lips.

Graumdor #2

Graumdor stumbled back, his spear flashing first to one side, then the other in desperation. Only just fending off Eklindiss’s attacks, he had no time to analyze the larger man’s attack pattern for weaknesses.
The older man spun around and swung his spear toward Graumdor’s face. He tried to get his spear up in time to deflect the blow-
He looked up from the ground, a line of fire burning in his cheek. Leaping to his feet, he spun to face his opponent once more. The older man gave a wicked smile, his dry, cracking lips dripping blood down his smooth-shaved chin.
“Quit while you can, scholar. The fighting pit is no place for you.”
Graumdor shook his head. “No. This is where I belong. I want combat. I want battle. I want blood.”
Eklindiss’s smile widened and turned savage. “As you wish, Ink hand. Blood you shall have.” Without warning, his spear flashed toward Graumdor’s face again.
Once more, it connected before he could get his spear up to defend. This time, the shaft slammed into the side of his head and he tumbled sideways to the ground.
With a growl and a shake of his head, Graumdor climbed to his feet. Feigning more weakness than he felt, he leaned on his spear, digging its tip into the soft soil beneath his feet.
The older man chuckled. “Are you truly so weak? Even a lowly ink hand should have more strength than you.”
Swallowing his anger, Graumdor kept his face neutral. Perhaps it would seem more natural if he did not, but he could not afford to lose his mind to anger now. His chances of coming out of this alive were exceptionally slim as it was. He backed up a few steps, almost to the limits of the pit before he stopped and raised his spear a hand-width out of the dirt. He spat a mouthful of blood into the dirt and waited for his opponent to come.
Eklindiss shook his head, as though in disbelief, and advanced on Graumdor. “If you truly wish to die, I will grant your wish, whelp.”
Graumdor clenched his teeth to keep himself from hurling furious insults at the larger man. Now was not the time. He wasn’t likely to get more than one chance at this.
The older man leaped at him, bringing his spear down in a deadly arc.
Through the beating of his pulse in his ears, Graumdor no longer heard anything else. The leaping man’s mouth was open wide in a scream that he couldn’t hear. He imagined the crowd around him were likely roaring and jeering at the two of them, but he couldn’t hear that either. The thudding in his ears drowned all of it out.
He struggled to force himself to wait until the last possible moment. The leaping man was several paces above him now with the spear driving down toward him. If it connected, it would impale him. This was it. He held his position for just a moment longer, until he could be certain his adversary would be unable to correct his course.
Now! Graumdor thought as he spun to come around behind his opponent, spinning his spear toward the man’s head.
In an instant which seemed to go on through all the ages of the world, the butt end of the shaft of his spear connected with the back of his opponent’s head with a thunderous crack that resounded in his ears over the thumping of his heart.
Eklindiss pitched forward face-first into the dirt.
Without hesitation, Graumdor leaped forward with his spear in both hands and plunged the weapon deep into the older man’s back. It slid into the thick cords of muscle almost without resistance to well beyond the sharpened point before it hit something solid and the spear stopped.
Graumdor leaned all his weight onto the spear, pushing it deeper. It moved down less than a handspan before stopping again. The fallen man’s body trembled, a foot kicked and his neck twitched, then he stilled. His dark flesh paled to almost white.
Releasing the spear, Graumdor turned to look at his audience. Without exception, shock colored the features of the onlookers. Each and every one of them stood with drooping jaws and wide eyes.
Graumdor spread his arms wide and stared accusingly at each and every one of them. Had they all known how overmatched he was? Did they all know that he was supposed to either give up or die? Did this happen every time? Did they intentionally try to weed out everyone they considered unsuitable for the position?
Rage boiled in his veins. Was this truly what his people had become?
The Editor came forward, but when he reached for Graumdor’s hand he snatched it away, raising his hand in victory himself. He stared accusingly at the Editor and spoke in an undertone. “I know what happened here. You’re going to tell me everything.”
Ignoring him, the Editor moved around the fighting pit announcing Graumdor as the victor.
He gritted his teeth. This was neither the time nor the place, but he was going to find an answer to this. He would not rest until he had answers. If this was truly what his people had become, then he needed to do something about it. Stabbing each other in the back for advancement was one thing, but conspiring to keep those perceived as weak from advancement was not acceptable.
You and I will have words, Editor. Make no mistake.

I hope you’re enjoying these excerpts. Just a reminder that while the book will be available everywhere at release, due to retailer peculiarities it is currently available for pre-order everywhere except Amazon. If you’re interested, you can pre-order at your favorite non-Amazon retailer at: http://books2read.com/calamity1-shadow

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Shadow of the Overlord Chapters 5, 6, & 7

November 27, 2018 by Kevin Potter Leave a Comment

 

Shadow of the Overlord, Chapters 5, 6, and 7

(Just keep in mind these are very rough, unedited drafts)

 

CHAPTER 5

Quillliaurran raced over the final stretch of the Thurgian Strait. The bowl-like shape of the rocky beach here seemed a perfect example of what the bonded sometimes called a ‘natural harbor.’ Not that they had need of such things now. With dragons reaching sizes adequate to carry dozens of riders and more, travel by ship was rapidly becoming obsolete.
He zipped over the tops of the lush trees, though he still enjoyed their sharp scent. It was a smell he associated with life, with growing things, with the light and pleasure of being one— at peace —with the world around him.
If only the Overlord could learn that, he thought. Rather than always craving more, if the Divinity Himself could learn to be at peace with what he has…
Blasphemy! shouted a menacing voice in the forefront of his mind. If anyone, anyone, heard you say such things, they’d roast you alive! The Overlord wants, the Overlord gets. It’s that simple. Don’t be an idiot!
Doesn’t mean I can’t dream, he thought wistfully.
Ahead loomed the Overlord’s towering spire. Only those who’d been summoned were allowed within three leagues of the Overlord’s mountain. And since Quill had no wish to test the stories of what awaited those who disobeyed, he turned north to fly a wide detour around it.
He raced past the trees to the north of the Overlord’s mountain as fas as his wings would carry him. The red sun was directly overhead now, which meant he was out of time. He struggled to flap his wings harder, faster, as he climbed upward to pass the increasingly taller and thicker trees beneath him.
Although still a fraction of the height of the Overlord’s spire, he estimated the trees below at close to four leagues in height, and the tallest among them might have been close to a league in width.
How do trees grow this tall? he wondered, not for the first time. In no other place on all of Val-Harra did the trees and mountains grow so tall. He had never understood how or why it should be so.
Finally, Quill thought as the huge clearing finally came into view. For leagues around, the trees vanished with no trace of root or leaf, and on the north end of the clearing they started up again, but at almost double the previous height. It was there, he knew, the malachite wyrm made her lair.
The clearing itself was actually an immense canopy of trees bent and twisted together to form a ceiling as dense and strong as any stone.
He dropped from the air almost a league before the entrance to the canopied lair and walked the remaining distance.
Two wingspans from the entrance to the canopy, a pair of agate wyrms snaked their heads out from the shadows to halt him.
“I’ve been summoned,” Quill said, trying to keep the indignation in his voice. It helps to cover his quaking terror.
“You’re late,” one of the dragons growled.
“Do not delay,” the other hissed. “The mistress is not known for her patience.”
Quill nodded and clenched his muscles to keep his scales from clicking together with his trembling flesh. He moved forward, his gait awkward and stiff. Gritting his teeth, he tried to stop all the telltale signs his body was giving that we was utterly terrified.
The inside of the canopy could not have been more different from his expectations. While the trees on the outside were green with leaves and covered in fresh, moist bark, the inside was dead. No branches jutted in, no bark survived. The trees and other foliage were mostly gray and rotting.
He entered a tunnel formed by thickly massed trees and followed it through a maze of twists and turns, all the while it sloped downward. After a few minutes, the trees vanished and he was surrounded by walls of earth and a while later, going deeper and deeper into the ground all the while, the walls turned to solid stone.
After a short while, the stone walls opened into a wide chamber. The entire cavern wavered, as though he saw it through the fumes of a bonfire. The stone walls were smooth and even, the ceiling and floor free of stalactite or stalagmite. At the far end, a massive green shape huddled in the darkness, crimson eyes wide and staring. They looked through him as though he didn’t exist.
Although Quill felt certain there must be more to the chamber that he wasn’t seeing— the wavering was an obvious illusion. So obvious, in fact, it was a certainty that she wanted him to see it. Was it an expression of her power? —he immediately dropped to his knees and prostrated himself before her.
“Mistress Underlord,” he breathed, forcing his voice to convey respect rather than terror.
“Do you know what I do with dragons who cannot figure out how to be on time?” she asked conversationally.
Quill gulped. “Mistress Underlord, I-”
“Don’t waste your breath,” she hissed. “I have no care for whatever your excuse happens to be. At the request of one I hold in high regard, you shall not be punished. This time. But do ensure it does not recur.”
Quill gulped again. “Yes, Mistress.”
“I trust Sindorriaunna informed you of why you are here?”
“She… mentioned it.”
“Good. I’ll hear no protestations. He requested you specifically.”
“Who?” Quill was confused. Who had requested him? For what?
“The human you’ll be bonding.” The Underlord’s voice was matter-of-fact, as though he should have known this already.
Quill coughed in surprise. “A… human?”
The crimson eyes bored into him. “If that is a problem, you’ll take it up with him. I have no interest in hearing it. He made the request, I approved, and so it is decided.”
Quill’s mind reeled. What human could even make such a request? He didn’t know of any humans, outside of the Overlord’s pet, who even had any freedom here. There were others, of course, that had been recruited to the Overlord’s cause. Elves, ogres, trolls, gnelwyn, even the occasional dwarf. But a human? They generally couldn’t be kept alive long enough to convert them. Most of the fools insisted on fighting to the death the moment they saw a wyrm.
“Understood, Mistress,” he said, trying desperately to cover the quaver in his voice. “But, why did he choose me, of all dragons?”
“Ask him yourself!”
Quill clamped his mouth closed. It was clear now that she would answer no question she did not find important.
“Where will I find this human?”
“Behind you,” called a small voice from his rear.
Ordinarily, Quill would never turn his back on the Underlord. Nor on any other wyrm in a position of authority. Strictly speaking, it was not allowed. Dragons had been killed for less. But the Underlord’s attention had gone elsewhere. Either she was pointedly ignoring him, or he was no longer within her notice. Clearly, that was his dismissal. It might as well have been just Quill and the human in the chamber.
He spun around to face the human behind him.
And found himself decidedly unimpressed.
The man was small, even for a human. He was slight of build and short, with greasy gray hair and a thick, bushy beard which together gave the impression of a hyena. He was dressed in black cow leathers and carried a silvery sword which reflected every drop of light shone on it a hundred-fold.
The human smiled, his black eyes crinkling. “Greetings, Quill.”
Quill narrowed his eyes. One I hold in high regard, she had said. Perhaps at least a modicum of respect was expected here.
“Greetings, master…?”
“Lord Novarel,” the man said. “During informal meetings such as this, you may refer to me simply as Novarel, but in public or in front of our troops, the title is mandatory.”
Though he seethed at being forced to pay a mere human such respect, Quill nodded in silence.
“I understand your reluctance, Quill. I know you are used to humans being the enemy. Please. Allow me to explain. I have been here in Thorutia for a very long time. I know things few living humans remember. I have been personal adviser to the Overlord himself for a great many years. I’d be surprised if anyone alive enjoys as much of his Divinity’s trust as I do. As such, I am held in high regard by all on the isle.”
“And why does the Overlord trust you so much?”
“I serve him willingly, as I have from the beginning. I allow him to plumb the depths of my mind for my true motivations. He knows he can trust me. And I have made myself… useful. My information is much of the reason we control so much of the southern reaches of the continent. I helped him secure the loyalty of certain tribes of ogres, trolls, and more.”
“How?” Quill wasn’t trying to be suspicious, but he couldn’t help it. This all seemed awfully convenient.
“Insight,” the human said simply.
“You know that much of the humanoids?”
Novarel shrugged. “I have an understanding of what motivates them.”
Quill sighed, and Novarel raised his brows.
Lowering his head, Quill looked the human in the eyes. As he’d thought, those eyes were pure black inside a white sclera. Were his irises black, or did he not even have them?
So very strange, he thought. Aloud, he asked, “Why do you want me?”
Novarel chuckled. “My dear charoite, that is a conversation for another time.”
Quill clenched his teeth.
“Now, now,” the human said. “We have more pressing concerns.”
Quill narrowed his eyes. “Such as?”
“Getting you ready for the bonding ritual.”
“Ready?” Quill asked, confused. “What is needed for me to be ready?”
The human chuckled again, darkly this time. “It is truly sad, dear boy, how little you know of your own kind. How long has it been since you Eskerialized?”
Quill stared blankly. “Um, since I what?”
Now the human roared in laughter.
After nearly a minute of uninterrupted, almost sobbing laughter, Novarel had tears streaming down his face but he finally calmed the choking laugh enough to speak. “No one told me you were funny!”
Quill stared, more confused than ever.
Novarel’s laughter continued for another long minute before he finally sobered. He wiped the tears from his grinning face.
The human looked up into Quill’s eyes and the mirth vanished, his eyes going wide. “Do you truly mean to tell me you have no idea what I’m talking about? How can you possibly know so little of your own species? Or your own existence, for that matter?”
Quill swallowed his indignation as best he could. “I’m afraid I don’t know how to answer that, Lord Novarel. I haven’t the slightest clue what you’re talking about.”
The human’s eyes narrowed. “Have you never wondered at why young dragons are shaped differently than you? Or how they become as they do when growing to adulthood? By the Overlord’s tail, do you remember nothing of being a wyrmling?”
“Actually, no,” Quill said. “I have no memory of being anything other than I am. And I assumed the wings just took time to grow in. What am I missing?”
Novarel sighed. “Not now, Quill. We have more important matters to attend to.”
Quill couldn’t stop the growl from rumbling up from his chest to the back of his throat.
“Enough,” Novarel barked and Quill quieted. “The bonding is our priority just now. The rest can come later. We’ll deal with your education soon enough.”
He nodded, embarrassed by his outburst. “What must I do?”
“Bleed,” the gravelly voice said, and Quill shivered.

 

CHAPTER 6

 

Taliesimon stood proud, the only girl in a long line of boys, at the start line of a course of obstacles meant to test the mettle of those who wished to join the honorable order of the dragoons.
The boy to her left, like many others, had a shaved head and wore nothing aside from his torn and filthy breeches. The boy to her right, however, wore his short, blond hair combed band and his pristine linen clothing and fine, doeskin boots smelled like money.
The boy on the blond boy’s other side shied away from him, as though he had a contagious disease.
He was shunned by them as much as she was, it seemed.
“Ready?” a tall dragoon called from the front, but several voices growling from behind her brought everyone’s attention around to the back of the line. A bald-headed, shirtless boy in soft, black leather breeches and sandaled feet strode toward the line while three older boys, initiates, Taliesimon felt certain, chased after him.
Hold on, she thought. Is that a… another girl?
The shirtless youth had narrow, angular features but thick, full lips and a slightly swollen chest. The earliest beginnings of breasts, perhaps? If so, she lacked any degree of modesty or decorum.
The child hurried to the line and sidled in between Taliesimon and the bare-headed by to her left.
“Dragoons!” the middle chaser, the oldest, called. “That girl cannot be allowed to test. It is against all-”
“It is against nothing,” the dragoon in front barked. “It is unorthodox, to be sure, but young Taliesimon here had prior approval to compete. Allowing another girl in will change nothing.”
“But sir! We have never-”
“It matters not, initiate. Just because there has never been a female dragoon does not mean there cannot be. We will allow them to compete.”
The three initiates frowned and Taliesimon grinned. Glancing at the new arrival, she found the bald girl grinning as well.
“Way to make an entrance,” she said, impressed.
“Thanks,” the girl said as she ran a hand over her smooth head, looking almost shy.
Taliesimon extended a hand. “I’m Taliesimon.”
The girl touched a palm to hers and said, “Okara,” and they both grinned again.
“Ready positions!” The dragoon barked and Taliesimon spun to face forward, her right leg forward knee bent, and the left one stretched out behind her.
“Do you know what’s ahead?” Okara asked softly.
Taliesimon gaped. “You haven’t studied the course?”
The smaller girl shrugged.
She’s going to die, Taliesimon thought. They’re going to eat her alive.
From the small cart at his side, the dragoon ahead of them produced a long, ashwood staff with a long, wide banner depicting a black longsword protruding from a brown serpent’s fanged head on a field of pristine white. He waved the banner back and forth above his head three times while the lines of dragoons on either side of the narrow path changed, “From the fires of youth, dragoons will rise. Only the strong will rise.”
They repeated the phrase with each wave of the banner.
“Be careful,” Taliesimon whispered urgently. “Keep your eyes open. Don’t get in their way.”
“In their way?” The girl was incredulous.
“The boys will hurt you. It’s all competition to them. They don’t care who they hurt to get ahead.”
The girl’s eyes widened for a moment, then her expression went blank, her eyes hardened, and she nodded.
After the fourth wave of the banner and the fourth repetition of the chant, the lead dragoon stabbed the longstaff into the muddy ground and barked, “begin!”
Pandemonium erupted around Taliesimon as the boys ripped and tore at one another’s hair and clothing, throwing opponents to the muddy ground. The boy to Taliesimon’s right was pulled down by his finely groomed blond hair and trampled. Blood poured from his mouth. Taliesimon waited at the line drawn into the mud before her, gripping the smaller girl’s bare arm.
For a moment, Okara struggled against her, trying to run forward, then she seemed to notice the violence being bandied about and relaxed in Taliesimon’s grip.
All the boys with bare chests and shaved heads made a lot more sense now. She’d known the start especially wouldn’t be pleasant, but she hadn’t fully expected the amount of hair and shirt pulling and the violent trampling that had occurred.
But, if Okara didn’t expect this, why is she-
Wrenching pain in the back of her head cut off the thought and she was flung forward. The muddy ground flew up toward her face.
She clenched her eyes tight as her face struck home for the second time today. Even though her eyes were closed, the world seemed to spin around her.
A laugh sounded above her, though it seemed far away and indistinct. Footsteps pounded past her and the laughter, bitter and mocking, dissipated.
With her mouth full of thick fluid, Taliesimon choked and coughed, but the fluid remained. She tried to roll herself over, but her body did not respond. Holy Trevandor, she thought. Please don’t let me die here! Why won’t my body cooperate?
Then a small hand gripped her shoulder and pulled her over. The crimson light of Kaustere burned through her eyelids and she coughed again. This time, the fluid vacated her mouth and she sucked in a gasping, labored breath. Though the breath burned all the way down, it felt sweet and refreshing. As she drew in her third breath, she opened her eyes and found her lids sticky with a thick crimson fluid.
She lay dazed for several moments before she tried to move again. Okara’s hairless head appeared above her, eyes wide and mouth agape. Her eyes are beautiful, Taliesimon thought, and accepted the thought as the dazed nonsense it was. They shine like sapphires in the light, but brighter, much brighter.
The wide sapphire eyes blinked and Taliesimon blinked as well.
“Are you okay?” the girl asked.
She coughed again, then turned her head and spit a build-up of fluid from her mouth. She tasted blood and finally made sense of the situation.
With a slight nod to the smaller girl, she struggled to sit up. After a moment, the other girl gripped her hands and pulled her up to a sitting position.
“We have to move,” she croaked.
Okara nodded and pulled Taliesimon to her feet. “They did that purely out of spite, didn’t they?”
“I expect so,” Taliesimon rasped as she took her first wobbly steps toward the lead dragoon ahead. He now stood a pace off the path, just before it curved into the dark woods. He offered her a grim nod as she trotted past with Okara in tow.
“Our advantage,” Taliesimon gasped as she ran. “Is that we have nowhere to go but up.”
“And now we’re the ones,” Okara added, not sounding the least bit winded. “Who can crack skulls from behind. They’ll never see us coming.”
Taliesimon nodded, but kept silent. Already out of breath, the less of it she wasted, the better off she would be. And I’m not sure how to respond to her viciousness, she added silently.
turning the bend into the woods, Taliesimon grunted. “Faster, Okara. Jump soon.”
Without a sound, the small girl ran faster. Within moments, she came up even with Taliesimon then seemed to force herself to slow, as though she were unwilling to move farther ahead. “Sharpened. Stakes. In. Pit,” she gasped and Okara nodded.
Ahead, a tall, muscular boy ran. The muscles of his back rippled with every movement and his freshly shaven head was marred by numerous razor cuts.
Either he did it himself, or his father’s face must look like a torture victim, she thought in sympathy. It had to be terribly painful.
“I’d wager that’s the snake who hit you,” Okara growled.
Taliesimon wanted to smack herself. Of course he was! He must have had the same idea as she, wait for the others to bloody each other then jump ahead of them all. But that idea had clearly been a spectacular failure. Somehow, they were still the last three in the course.
How did that happen? she wondered. Surely, at least some of them had to be bloodied worse than me.
She couldn’t argue with the reality, however. There hadn’t been a single beaten or bloodied boy ahead of her on the field when she’d risen and they’d finally started moving.
Clearly, she had miscalculated somewhere and now it was going to take everything she had to come in well enough to continue the testing.
The blue-eyes girl sped up, pulling away from her. What was she planning to do? Taliesimon tried to increase her pace to match, but her thighs burned already. Her knees and feet were beginning to ache, her lungs her on fire, and the roiling nausea in her belly was too much to ignore.
Even pushing herself as hard as she could, she could not match the smaller girl’s pace.
The path curved to the left and the boy disappeared around it, followed by Okara, who was rapidly gaining on the older boy. After a few moments, Taliesimon rounded the bend herself. Ahead, three boys leaped a chasm in the path almost in unison. The two on the outsides cleared it easily, but the boy in the center, the blond boy who’d been at her right hand in the line, stumbled on his jump and leaped much lower than the others. He fell just before the far edge, only just catching himself with his arms.
He hung there a moment, still, as though in shock. Then he seemed to paw at the lip of the chasm. Over and over, his fingers dug into the dirt for purchase and came up empty. It was only a matter of time, she saw. Unless he found a stone or tree root or something else firm enough to hold his weight, he would fall.
The boy who’d hurt her was almost to the edge of the pit and Okara was little more than a pace behind him. The slight tremble in the boy’s legs and the increased tightness in his arms made it clear to her that he feared the jump.
Taliesimon scoffed silently. With that muscular body, he should have not difficulty in making the jump. Easy as spilt milk, as the saying went.
The entire world seemed to slow, as though time itself had almost stopped, as the boy’s foot landed at the edge of the chasm and he thrust up with all the strength of that powerful leg to make the leap.
Impossibly, Okara’s left leg shot sideways in the instant before her own right leg touched down for her own jump. Her left foot struck the boy’s right and a resounding crack accompanied the crumpling of the boy’s ankle and as she moved upward in her lead across the chasm, the boy fell almost straight down into the pit.
His high, terrified shriek was a loud as it was short-lived.
Taliesimon stared in shock at the spot he fell from.
I would never have, she thought, dazed. This is important, but… what am I going to do? She’s a murderer.
Taliesimon snapped her jaw closed and the world seemed to return to normal time. She glared straight forward, determined as never before to make the jump and overcome the course.
Her last few steps before the chasm passed in a blur, her pulse thundering in her ears. She shortened her last three steps before the edge, to ensure her right foot landed at the very edge of the pit. She sucked in a deep breath and held it just before her foot touched down. She thrust up from her right foot with all her might, her thigh, calf, and torso seemed a single muscle as all worked perfectly to send her sailing into the air.
Taliesimon glance down as she went up and caught sight of the broken body, and a dozen more just like it, impaled by the stakes.
Oh, no, she thought. I’m not going to make it.

 

CHAPTER 7

 

Dargon flexed the fingers of his right hand. “Incredible,” he breathed. Aside from the scab over the cut on his finger, it was as though nothing had happed yesterday. And try as he might, he could not push the image of the blue-glowing water from his mind. It was his duty, both as a Moritzan citizen and as a member of the royal family, to obey the Trevan, but in his heart he knew the priest’s answer could not be true. Even deep blue liquids never glowed blue under the light of Kaustere. At best, it would produce a purple or violet glow.
Surely the Trevan knows this, he thought as he wrapped his hand around the hilt of the wooden sword hanging from his belt.
Shaking his head to banish the thoughts, he whipped the practice sword from its scabbard. As always, the hilt felt good in his hand. It felt right. Natural.
“Is everything alright, my lord?” asked the warrior across the battle-floor from him.
“I’m fine, Gerand. Please, begin.”
The leather-clad man drew his own practice blade and the two squared off, mirroring one another’s movements. Dargon narrowed his eyes at he man and stepped toward him, wary of some trick. Gerand was no longer young, but he was still as skilled a warrior as Dargon had known.
Gerand stepped just beyond striking distance and saluted, holding the flat of his wooden blade up between his eyes. An instant later, the blade flashed down and he leaped forward.
Dargon blocked the blow with his own blade, the loud crack of wood rattling his ears. He moved smoothly into a low swing, but found his blade blocked. He swung high with a similar result.
“Speed, my lord. You must move faster,” the old warrior said.
Dargon nodded and swung with all the force he could muster.
Crack.
“No, your highness,” Gerand barked. “Not harder. Putting all your strength behind a blow makes it slower. Speed of movement will win a fight much more often than brute force. Light slashes and shallow cuts will eventually wear down an opponent, but brute force against his defenses is far more likely to exhaust you than him.”
“Yes, ser.”
“Again.”

The drills continued for hours, as they had since he was old enough to hold a sword. King Duncan had established early on in Dargon’s life that he needed to be a warrior first and a ruler second. Although the dreaded torthugra hadn’t been seen in centuries, nor had any of their expeditions returned from Thugra Isle in even longer. They had to be ever-vigilant. War was coming, his father assured him. And when it did, they needed to be ready. They couldn’t afford to be caught off their guard. Too many lives depended on them.
When Gerand finally called a halt, even he was breathing heavy. Dargon could hardly lift his sword arm. The old warrior landed at least three dozen strikes which would have been killing blows while Dargon had managed only one.
Sheathing his blade, the old warrior walked off the dirt battle floor and into the green grass of the courtyard proper to the water barrels and proceeded to scoop out several ladles full which he dumped over his head. At last, when his hair and shirt were thoroughly soaked, he slurped a dozen ladles full into his mouth.
Dargon followed his example, though with much less water going over his head. The chestnut curls were unruly enough without drenching them in tepid water.
“You did well today, Lord Dargon. You continue to impress me with the rapidity with which you learn.” He smiled. it seemed genuine enough.
“I did?” Dargon asked, uncertain. “I rarely land a blow against you.”
“My lord,” Gerand said patiently. “Are you aware of how many years I’ve been training with the sword?”
“Close to forty, isn’t it, ser?”
“I began my sword training upon acceptance into the dragoons thirty-eight years ago.”
“You were a dragoon?” Dargon asked, excited. In all the years Gerand had been teaching him, that was a detail he had never disclosed.
The old swordsman sighed. “yes, I was. But,” he held up a finger for silence. “To focus on relevance. How long have you been training with the sword?”
“Well, I don’t know if you’d call the silly exercises when I was four training-“
“I would.”
“Well, in that case then about eight years, I suppose.”
“And how many of formal teaching?”
Dargon considered. “About three or four, I think.”
“So, between my vastly greater experience and being roughly twice your size and possibly thrice your weight, do you knot think landing even one killing blow against me is rather impressive?”
“Well, when you put it that way, I suppose so.”
Gerand sighed. “Enough,” he said through a laugh. “You are a quick study, but don’t forget to keep practicing. The more you work at it, the greater skill you will achieve.”
“Yes, ser.”
“Now run along. Find something fun to do before your archery session with Jorimund.”
Dargon nodded and spun on his heel to trot back to the keep.
Although his destination was more than three dozen twists and turns and stairways into the keep, almost as though his great-grandfather had been trying to hide it in shame when he’d built the structure, Dargon knew the way by heart. He could have found the massive chamber blindfolded, he was certain. When he came to the immense, diamondwood double doors, engraved with the image of an open book with flames roaring out of it with a spitted serpend just above the flames, Dargon grinned from ear to ear. He pushed the door open and waves of bone-numbing cold rolled into him.
With a shiver, he grasped the torch from its wall sconce outside the door and stepped into the massive chamber, his elm-heeled boots echoing on the marble floor. He walked around the inner walls lighting torches, then walked through the towering wooden shelves to light the lanterns throughout. Finally, he stopped at the brick-enclosed hearth at the heart of the chamber. Stacking several lengths of chopped wood into the center, he thrust the torch between them and waited for the dried wood to catch.
He stood and placed the torch in one of the matching ivory sconces to either side of the hearth. Straitening, he breathed in a deep breath and held it. After a moment, he released the threat and felt the tension melt away.
This was his space. Few people would even think to look for him here, and it was so out of the way that the chances of anyone coming here by accident was so close to nil as to be indistinguishable.
Turning a slow circle, he took in the wonder of his sanctuary. The wooden cases stretching away from the central hearth were as the spokes of a wheel coming out from a central hub. Each one stretched more than seventy spans before ending a dozen paces before the wall. Each stood more than twice his height and consisted of eight to twelve shelves, each covered with books. Some were bound in leather and others in wood or even cloth. Some were merely loose sheafs of parchment held together by strings of hemp. At the end of each of the two-dozen cases was an oaken bin filled with rolled scrolls. Most were housed in tubes of wood or stone or bone, but some were loose, held closed only by strips of leather, twine, string, or ribbon.
Even after years of coming here, the sight took his breath away. There were even more books here— more stories, more history, more information —than existed anywhere else that he knew of, and easily more than he could ever hope to read if he lived for four lifetimes.
How can they shun this place? he wondered, not for the first time.
Then a new thought occurred to him. But, if Gaureth shunned the library like everyone says, then why would he have built it in the first place?
He froze. He attacked the thought from every angle he could imagine, but try as he might, he couldn’t find a flaw in the thought. For the first time, he was left seriously questioning the things he had always been taught.
There was no scenario he could come up with that made any sense in which Gaureth would have gone to the time, trouble, and expense to have the place built if the place hadn’t brought him either income, joy, goodwill, or knowledge.
And on that note, if it had been shunned since its creation, then where in the nine hells had all the books come from? Why wasn’t it covered in layers of dust? And why were there torches in this part of the keep?
It was yet another series of valid points that he couldn’t find a hole in. There was simply no situation he could imagine in which the library’s size, state, and truly, even its existence made sense if it was true that Gaureth had shunned books and learning.
Dargon shook his head to clear the thoughts away. He didn’t come here to contemplate such serious matters, he came here to escape his own life and life someone else’s adventure for a while.
He turned to the plush armchairs on the other side of the hearth and lifted a tallow candle from the table between them. Using the torch, he lit the candle and replaced it in its holder on the table.
The book he’d been reading for the past several weeks, the collected tales of Veralon Scale-Breaker, remained in its place next to the porcelain candle holder. With a broad, excited grin, he picked up the massive book and plopped down into the plush chair.
Pulling the red ribbon marking his place, Dargon continued where he’d left off and was immediately immersed into the adventures of the greatest dragoon to ever live.
Dargon found himself in the shoes of the great hero, stepping into a tiny, unnamed city-state near the Verdant Forest after his latest victory over the invading hordes of torthugra. He needed a rest and hoped to find it in the tiny city.
Town would be a more accurate word, Dargon thought as he gazed at the faded boards making up the facades of the homes and businesses.
That evening, Dargon, in the shoes of Veralon, sat by the hearth in the town’s single inn with his feet up on a stool, letting the warmth of the fire melt his cares away.
Any minute now, he thought, the peace is going to explode. The anticipation was almost too much to bear. He had realized early on that every story started this way, with the great hero trying to relax and get away from the conflicts that plagued his life. But it never lasted long. His peace always devolved to ever-greater conflicts.
Dargon almost bounced with excitement as he waited for the new adventure to begin.
Within minutes, his anticipation was rewarded in the form of a distraught mother bursting into the inn. Almost in hysterics, wailing about her missing daughter. It turned out that this girl was only the latest in a rash of young children disappearing. One every few days. The locals hadn’t put together that it was a connected problem until almost ten of the children had vanished. At first, the populace had suspected each other. But as it went on, they ran out of suspects. They turned their eyes to the feral gnelwyn of the forest, but were quickly informed by the local dragoons that no gnelwyn had been seen there in months.
In the absence of other options, the populace started blaming the torthugra. The villagers in the inn turned to Veralon, who had already become quite famous, for help. But he informed them that the only known torthugra in the city-states were now far to the north, since he had led his dragoons to destroy the force which had been nearby, and there had been no survivors.
The villagers were disheartened, but Veralon, Honorable dragoon that he was, offered to help. He couldn’t just stand by while their children vanished. Naturally, this task was quite different from his usual quests and would require a very different method than he was used to. Battle against obvious enemies was the usual gamut of these stories. Dargon got even more excited as he followed the Scale-breaker through his investigation of the mystery. As the tension mounted, Dargon grew more and more excited. The stakes grew with each page, as the taking of another child neared, and his pulse quickened.
Dargon glanced at the tallow candle. He’d already been reading for one and a half turns. He only had a half a turn left before he had to get on his way to archery with Jorimund.
“Please,” he whispered as he read. “I have to get to the end before I have to go.”
He made an effort to read faster, as fast as he could without missing details.
Veralon followed a sequence of clues Dargon hadn’t even recognized as clued until Veralon pointed them out. Days passed as he followed clue after clue and Dargon had to wipe sweat from his brown. Finally, the clued led Veralon beyond the town to the Cliffs of Thorutia. He climbed down the cliff to a hidden cave and snuk in, wearing nothing but his soft breeches and a long dagger, having decided stealth was more important than armor or a sword. The evidence had pointed to a single man being responsible for the whole sordid affair.
The hero crept into the dimly lit cave, dagger in hand. A short way in, an ambient glow filled the tunnel with greenish light. Veralon turned a corner and crouched down to watch in horror as an ancient-looking human stepped through an aisle between rows of stone cages which held children ranging from two to eight years of age, every last one bruised and bloody.
The man held up his arms and the stone bars shook, rattling with a deafening cacophony. The children cringed back away from the bars, almost I unison.
Dargon grimaced and Veralon with him, in combined disgust and fury.
Bastard! Dargon thought vehemently.
The human stepped to a stone altar where a boy of perhaps ten years lay calmly, free of both restraints and any sort of defiance. Dargon gritted his teeth as Veralon noticed the marks of brutal torture all over the boy’s body.
The old man placed his hands on the boy’s chest and Veralon tensed as he prepared to act. He had no intention of letting this old man kill the boy.
Without warning, the boy’s eyes bulged from his face and his back arched, his hand curling into fists. His mouth opened wide as though to scream, but no sound emerged.
The boy’s flesh shriveled and wrinkled, as though from great age. His hair grew long, turned white, and fell from his head within a few short moments, while at the same time the old man seemed to grow younger. His back straightened, his flesh tightened, and the long hair of his face and head thickened and turned from the frosty white to deep, blue-tinged black. The now-young man grinned and causually batted away the blade Veralon swung at him.
Dargon’s pulse thundered in his ears, his blood boiled. He read a detailed description of the young boy’s death, his flesh turning to dust and falling from his dry, brittle bones as the old sorcerer lost his facial ahir and his face became as smooth as Dargon’s own.
Dargon lost control.
His temper flared to rage and his vision turned crimson. He screamed, “This is why we don’t allow sorcery in the States!” before his vocalizations devolved into an inarticulate roar of fury. Leaping to his feet, the book tumbled from his lap, his hands clenched into fists so tight they trembled, and the open book before him burst into flames.

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Shadow of the Overlord, chapters 3 and 4

October 15, 2018 by Kevin Potter 1 Comment

 

Shadow of the Overlord, chapters 3 and 4

(please keep in mind that these are very rough, unedited versions)

 

CHAPTER 3

“Hold it steady, Master Dargon,” Jorimund said.
“You hold it bloody steady,” Dargon snapped under his breath. Who needs a bow, anyway?
“Young Master, you cannot hold the bow steady while you breath, especially when breathing so rapidly. Release the string.”
Dargon let the bow go slack.
“Now, follow the steps. Breath in as you draw back, hold your breath while you hold the string to your cheek. Take one second to aim, and fire.”
Dargon nodded glumly, but did as instructed.
Or tried to, at least. He arrow didn’t come within six spans of the straw man which was his target.
“Better, my lord. Better.”
Dargon scoffed. “If missing the broad side of a barn is better.”
“It is. You cannot hit if you do not fire. And you cannot improve your aim if you do not fire.”
He nodded, conceding the point. “Give me a sword and I’ll hack your arm off, but I’m wasted on the bow.”
“Not true, Master Dargon. You’re a quicker study with the sword, that is true. But you only need more practice with the bow. Remember the—”
“I know, I know. Remember the steps. String the bow, nock an arrow, draw with an indrawn breath. Hold the breath while I aim and do not breath out again until after firing the arrow.”
“I have never doubted your memory,” Jorimund said. “Your wit is sharper than any sword.”
Dargon felt certain there was a backhand to that compliment somewhere, but he couldn’t help beaming at the praise.
“Again,” Jorimund barked.
Dargon dutifully obeyed.

He loosed arrow after arrow after arrow. By the time the old Master-At-Arms let him stop, the blisters on his fingers had popped, regrown, popped again, and regrown to the size of grapes and his arm ached so badly he could scarcely move it.
I suppose this is what Father meant when he instructed Jori to work me ‘to the bone.’ With a sigh, he slowly unstrung the bow with his left hand, to avoid doing further harm to the blistered fingers of his right, and put both back in the small shed which passed for an armory here in the Moritz keep.
The oaken boards which passed for walls were splintered and beginning to molder. The inside of the shed stretched perhaps a span and a half and the inner walls were lined with four common bone swords and one supposedly of black torthugra-bone, though Dargon had his doubts about the legitimacy of the claim. there were a dozen wood-and-bone axes, each matched with a shield and the remaining wall was hung with unstrung bows of ash, elm, and horn, with two crafted from diamondwood.
In the middle space of the shed stood four oak dummies from which hung a suit of banded torthugra-bone armor, a massive suite of plates supposedly made from teranthric bone, a basic breastplate of oak, and another of diamondwood complete with greaves, epaulets, and coif.
Dargon hung his bow on its peg and wrapped the string around its length. Turning from the shed, he closed its heavy door and dropped the bar in place, clasping the thick, wooden padlock in its place to secure the bar.
Why do we bother with locking it? he thought, annoyed. It is not as though there’s actually anything of value in there. We don’t even have enough weapons to quell a peasant uprising, much less any real threat.
“Go and get that hand looked at,” Jori said.
Dargon nodded and, as though the Master-At-Arms’ words had caused it, his hand began to throb. Something wet dripped down his palm.
He tried to clench his fist, but the fingers wouldn’t curl past the shape of a sickle. Determined not to look at it, he spun on his heel and marched toward the keep.
Within moments, he was out of the hot sun and into the stone keep. The granite floors were smooth, if bare, but the stone of the walls had numerous cracks and were chipped almost everywhere. At seemingly random intervals, framed canvas paintings hung from the walls.
Dargon couldn’t help wondering why they bothered with decorations when the keep was in such a constant state of disrepair.
His feet followed the four turns and countless stone steps seemingly without his direction, leading him up into the central tower and into the Trevan’s office. His sturdy diamondwood door stood wide open, as it usually did during the day.
Leather-bound books lined the walls and a long marble counter at the back of the room held glass jars of pulpy, meaty things better left uninvestigated. Or so the Trevan always told him.
Even now, with blood dripping from his throbbing hand, however, he wanted nothing more than to go back and explore the grotesquery.
He pulled his attention to the front of the chamber where the Trevan himself sat. He was a large, thickly bearded man in midnight blue robes with kind, glittering gray eyes.
Quill in hand, the Trevan wrote ceaselessly in a large, green, leather-bound tome. The bright red desk was of a stone Dargon didn’t recognize, its surface textured with bumps almost half the size of cobblestones. The Trevan had once claimed the desk was carved from stone pulled from the eastern ocean, though Dargon didn’t see how that was possible. The thing was massive, surely— even now, it its carven state —it had to weigh at least forty, perhaps even sixty stone. What would the original chunk of material have been? A hundred stone? A thousand?
Dargon waited, though with the ache in his hand rapidly working toward a crushing inferno his patience waned quickly.
After a minute, the crimson light of Kaustere reflecting off the eastern sea as it sank toward its home there caused the stone of the Trevan’s desk to blaze scarlet and the youngish man lifted his quill to dip it into the inkwell. Dargon cleared his throat softly.
Face still turned down toward his page, the Trevan glanced up at Dargon with arched brows. “Yes, milord?”
Dargon raised is arm and brandished his bloody hand as though it were a flaming torch. Tiny crimson droplets spattered half the desk, one or two of them soaking into the page of the Trevan’s open book.
The Trevan’s flinty eyes narrowed for an instant, then went wide as he seemed to process Dargon’s meaning. “Come and sit, boy,” he said softly, patting the seat of a chair next to his.
Dargon felt certain the chair hadn’t been there a moment ago, but with the pain in his hand he didn’t fully trust his senses.
After a moment of confused hesitation, he stepped around the desk and eased himself down into the carved mahogany chair, careful not to jar his still-bleeding hand. The seat proved much more comfortable than it looked.
The Trevan pulled a bowl of carved bone from beneath his desk and gently eased Dargon’s hand into it. The healer then pulled a stone pitcher, full of clear water, from the same place and sat it on the desk. “How did this happen?”
“Training.” Dargon’s voice was tight.
“Jorimund?”
Dargon grimaced.
“I thought so. I am going to have words with him over this,” the Trevan growled through clenched teeth.
“No!” Dargon snaked his hand out to grip the Trevan’s arm as hard as he could. “Promise me you will not!”
The Trevan stared at him a moment, then nodded. “Okay, Dargon. Calm down.” He pried Dargon’s fingers from his arm. “We need to take care of this hand.”
Dargon nodded and looked down at his ravaged fingers for the first time since training had ended. His stomach surged and he fought his body, forcing the bile back down his throat.
He couldn’t see much through the blood, which covered his palm and fingers. He didn’t have names for the shapes of the popped blisters covering the top two segments of his fingers. Thick, congealing fluid of sickly yellow and rotting green mixed with the blood at the tips of his fingers.
How is this so bad? All I was doing is firing arrows, he thought in some confusion.
The world seemed to swim, spinning around him, and the edges of his vision began go darken.
“Well, this looks a lot worse than it really is,” the Trevan said brightly.
Dargon blinked and his vision cleared. Looking down at his hand again, he squinted. “Are you certain?”
The Trevan smiled and pulled a folded piece of parchment from his robe. He carefully unfolded its contents and dumped them into the stone pitcher, the water foaming at the top and turning dark blue. He lifted the pitcher, his hand high on its handle, and whispered under his breath as he poured the blue water over Dargon’s hand.
Dargon couldn’t hear the words, but guessed at what they were. In many city-states, he had heard, Trevan was merely a title for a scholar, healer, or wise man, but here in Moritz they held to the old ways. The Trevan was, first and foremost, a priest of Trevandor. Some even said he was one of the rare few priests with true healing powers.
Dargon had never seen any proof of that, however.
From the moment the blue liquid touched his hand, the pain seemed to vanish. The liquid seemed to glow slightly, but it could have been a trick of the dwindling light of Kaustere.
As the blood and pus were washed away, Dargon was astounded to find that they Trevan was largely correct. A laceration near the base of one finger bled freely and the remains of several blisters covered the pads of his fingers, but there was little else.
I would swear there had been more than that, he thought.
The Trevan pulled a silk washcloth from his roe and soaked it in the blue— now purple —liquid, then gently wiped the remaining grime from Dargon’s skin.
“You see?” the Trevan said. “Just get this bleeding stopped and apply a salve for the blisters and you should be as good as new by morning.”
“So I see,” Dargon said in wonder, though he could hardly believe it. From the fire of agony in his fingers, he’d been certain the flesh must have been shredded to the bone.
The Trevan held a linen strip to the open cut while patting the rest of the hand dry with another silken cloth. Once it was dry, he wrapped another strip of linen about the cut finger and tied it, then put a paste from a jar hidden on one of the bookshelves onto several smaller strips and tied them onto the pads of Dargon’s fingers.
Smiling, the Trevan pushed aside the pitcher and bowl and eyed his handiwork. “How does it feel?’
“Good,” Dargon said, a bit suspicious now. He peered deep into the healer’s shining eyes for several moments. “Trevan, what was that light in the solution you poured on my hand?”
The Trevan’s eyes widened slightly. “Light? What light? I can only guess you must have been seeing a refraction of the light of Kaustere.”
“I’m not so sure. Are you certain it’s nothing you did?”
“Of course,” he said with a laugh just a bit higher pitched than usual. What could I have done?”
“Well, you are a priest, after all.”
The Trevan laughed again and this time it was genuine and mirthful. “Few priests, of any god, are granted real power, milord. Most of them are sorcerers and charlatans.”
“But they say you are one of them,” he blurted, shocked with how direct he was being.
“Not only is that presumptuous, Young Lord, but that question is a rather rude one. Priests do not flaunt such things.”
“And yet, you’ve done so enough for people to talk about it.”

 

CHAPTER 4

In the Verdant forest far to the south of Moritz, beneath the eternally green canopy where the light of Kaustere never touch, Rintalas stood with his hands raised. His green eyes darted from axe to pick to spear to arrow, he counted more than twenty of the bearded gnelwyn surrounding him.
He dropped the twin blades of giant bone he held in his hands, they stabbed into the loamy forest floor less than a handspan from his toes.
Too late to flee, too many of them to kill, he thought in frustration.
A pair of the diminutive creatures in the third rank from him conversed openly in the Gnelwyn language. Clearly they didn’t expect a ‘savage’ from the other side of The Spine to understand their language.
“What do we do? Since the dragons came our prisons are overflowing. Is there even room for another?”
“We’ll make room,” said the second. Between the higher— though still low, by his reckoning —voice and thin, silk facial hair, he expected this was was female.
Dra-guns? he thought. What in the name of all the gods is a dragon?
“As you say, Sureeka,” said the first in his gravelly voice. “Bind him,” he added in a shout.
Not good.
A few of the gnelwyn broke off from the rest. They searched him roughly, relieving him of every weapon he owned, including the tiny iron knife he kept hidden in his right boot to choruses of “oooooh,” and “ahhhh,” when the others saw the rare metal weapon.
The tiny blade was probably worth more than their homes were.
Once fully disarmed, his hands were pulled behind his back and bound in a length of black cord which looked as though it were made of a multitude of vines braided together.
Within minutes, they were marching to the east, away from the rising orb of Kaustere. He tested the bonds by yanking his hands apart. After a dozen tries, all he had to show for his efforts were aching shoulders and raw wrists, with a trickle of blood leaking into his left palm.
Damn, he thought. How am I going to get out of this? I have work to do.
Rintalas took a deep breath to center his mind and looked around him. He was surrounded by four ranks of gnelwyn warriors. Although most of them looked almost identical to him, the nearest one to his right seemed older than the others, his beard gray and grizzled and lined marring his face, particularly around the eyes and over his wide, angular forehead. Like the others, he wore his hair long and pulled back in a tight, thick braid. His clothing was plain, but appealing. Rintalas appreciated the natural, woodsy green of the vest and the dull, bark-like brown of his breeches. Under the woolen vest, this gnelwyn wore soft linen of midnight black which covered his arms down to the gray leather gloves and his feet were booted in soft black doeskin.
It was an excellent choice for stealth, Rintalas was forced to admit.
The gnelwyn’s face was grim and he stared straight ahead.
An itch in the back of his mind forced Rintalas to act. He leaned toward grim-face. “Hey, Grim,” he whispered. “Mind telling me where we’re headed?”
Grim-Face kept marching, eyes straight ahead, as though he hadn’t heard.
How rude.
“Hey, Grim,” he whispered louder. “Come on. Talk to me. It isn’t as though I could hurt you. I’m bound here.”
“Shut. Up,” Grim growled between clenched teeth.
“You know, that’s an awfully kind suggestion, but I think I’ll have to pass. You see, I came here for a reason and getting captured by you lot is rather far from that reason. So, since you’re keeping me from my job, you might as well give me some information.”
The gnelwyn to his other side turned to glare him.
He shrugged. “I know. Prisoners aren’t supposed to talk. I’ve taken a few prisoners myself in my time. But see, the whole silent thing doesn’t work for me. So how about we have a chat?”
Turning back to Grim-Face, Rintalas just caught the ghost of a faint smile which transformed instantly back into a grim scowl.
Progress, he thought.
“Come on. Anybod-”
Something wide and hard slammed into the back of his head, cutting him off and knocking him to his knees.
With muddled thoughts and swimming vision, he looked around in a daze. A think bead of something warm and wet trickled down the back of his neck.
Hmmm, he thought. Perhaps silence would serve me better just now.
Soft, grim chuckles surrounded him.
Slowly, the haze over his vision cleared and his own rugged leather boots came into sharp focus. In retrospect, and he should have foreseen it, his rough cow-hide boots and deep green, doeskin leggings made him stick out like a wolfhound in a fox den in this place. Of course, the silken tunic and furred vest didn’t help either.
For the first time, Rintalas looked past the gnelwyn at the forest around him and couldn’t help but marvel at it. He had never actually been to the Verdant Forest before. He’d thought he had been prepared for the reality of the place.
The dark trunks of trees glistened in the darkness, some smooth and some with bark grittier than sand. All reached hundreds of spans into the air where their leaved branches formed an impenetrable canopy overhead. The forest floor was black, with not a glimmer of light, yet Rintalas felt certain it was very near midday. His internal sense of time was generally flawless. Nevermind that he hadn’t seen the light Kaustere in over a week.
How do plants thrive on the forest floor without the touch of the Crimson God? he wondered.
Between the steamy moisture in the air, the black vines wrapped about tree trunks, and green ones hanging from the branches, and the plethora a vermin, insects, and snakes creeping, crawling, and slithering through the fauna convinced him that the Verdant Forest was no true forest, but rather a living jungle.
Had it been misnamed, all those centuries ago? Or had something changed this place? Could it have something to do with.. what was the word the gnelwyn had used? Dragons?
But how? What power in the world could alter the very landscape?
Away from the path, the jungle grew denser, the trees closer together and the vines and fauna proliferated more than usual. The path, however, grew wider, with the shrubbery and vermin reducing the farther they traveled, almost to the point of vanishing altogether.
Without warning, the path widened further until the trees vanished, leaving perhaps a hundred spans of open ground before the rocky slopes of the Spine of the World mountains. The gray stone towered over the trees, utterly dwarfing them.
The towering walls of rock trembled, shook, then began moving toward him! Slowly but steadily, and shaking all the while, they moved toward him and the troop of gnelwyn.
By Gaeia’s hammer! he thought. What is this?
A narrow gap appeared at the center of the moving wall of stone, small rocks and a mist of dust falling into it as it slowly widened, revealing a dark, empty chasm beyond.
A sharp jab in his back urged Rintalas forward, while the wall of stone continued to move toward him, gap widening like the jaws of some massive predator.
“What is this?” he asked, voice trembling.
Something struck the back of his head again, but not nearly as hard this time. Taking the hint, he clamped his mouth closed and let himself be herded into the darkness.
Within a dozen steps past the still-moving wall, his eyes adjusted to the deeper darkness and the massive cavern around him took his breath away.
Where did this place come from? he wondered. Gnelwyn are not dwarves. They are many things, but skilled miners and expert stonemasons are not among them.
Prodded by his escort, he walked the center path through a forest of dark pillars, each one decorated with an engraved face. Most of the images were narrow-eyed and stern, but one to his right had wide, bright eyes and a mouth turned up in a joyous grin.
The walls around the cavern were too distant to make out, but they seemed to sparkle in the slivers of crimson light arcing in from beyond the doors. Only then did he realize, truly realize that the moving wall of rock was, in fact, a set of massive double doors. It was a well-known fashion of the dwarves to build gates into their mountain cities out of the natural rock itself with minimal alteration so as to make it as indistinguishable from natural stone as possible.
The inside of the doors, though! They were engraved with images of great tunnels being mined, incredible structures being built, and metals being cast. The images were inlaid with sparkling gems and jewels and even spots of metal in a few places. Some grayish metal inlaid a dwarven hammer and a bright yellow metal formed a circlet around another dwarf’s brow.
“Incredible,” Rintalas breathed.
“Move, elf,” said a rough gnelwyn voice with another jab to his back.
“Only half,” he grumbled under his breath. It wasn’t worth another clout on the head to express his displeasure about his parentage being confused.
He started forward again at a quicker pace than before. Whatever awaited him in the depths of this mountain, it had to be better than how the warriors had treated him so far. Didn’t it?

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Shadow of the Overlord, Chapters 1 & 2

October 2, 2018 by Kevin Potter 8 Comments

 

Shadow of the Overlord, chapters 1 and 2

(please keep in mind that these are very rough, unedited versions)

 

CHAPTER ONE

The wind keened, high and sharp, through the leaves of the few trees to either side of the path which led from the smattering of farms into Cuularan. Though early in the day still, the dual suns had risen over the towering Spine of the World mountains in the west more than an hour ago.
Crimson Kaustere sat slightly above his black cousin, Asmodere, and both served to bake the hard ground. Taliesimon wondered idly if one could fry an egg on stone in the heat of those twin orbs.
The floorboards beneath her creaked as the flat bed of the wain leaned to one side on the uneven path, then jounced to the other without warning. She fell, cracking her knee against the sturdy, if weathered, oak.
“Blast it,” she muttered, massaging her knee. “That’s going to bruise.”
“Maybe that will teach you not stand in the back of a moving wain,” Father said gruffly.
He meant well, of course. She knew that. But he would never understand. Could never understand. She was too excited to sit.
Today is The Day, she thought. You’re content to be a farmer, father, but not me. Oh, no! Not me! I’m going to be a warrior, see if I don’t!
“Don’t know what you’re so excited about,” Jalaisen said. “They only agreed to let you test to shut you up. They don’t let girls into the Dragoons.”
“You take that back!” she shouted.
“I will not.”
“Take it back, Jay!” she yelled, pitching her voice even higher, her small hands clenching into fists at her sides. Somehow, she wasn’t sure how, exactly, she had gotten back to her feet. She glared at her older brother.
He glared right back, arms folded. “I will not. It is truth. You shall see.”
Taliesimon thrust her small fists against her hips. “I will be a dragoon, Jay. You’ll see. I don’t care if they’ve never accepted a girl before. I’ll be the first.”
Jalaisen scoffed. “We’ll see, little sister.”
She clenched her teeth in frustration. I’ll show them all, she thought. They’ll see.
“Don’t pout, little one,” Father said.
She ground her teeth. “I’m not.” She hated when that whiny note crept into her voice.
Father shook his head. “Are you certain you want to do this, Taly?
“Yep.”
Father sighed again. “Jalaisen, stop antagonizing your sister. She’s made her choice. She’ll stand or fall by merit of her own skills. Nothing you can say or do will change it.”
“Yes, Father.” Jalaisen turned his attention back to the road and took a few jogging steps to pull up even with Father on the bench at the front of the old wain.
Taliesimon did her best to push her outrage to the back of her mind. That was pride in his voice, talking about my skills, wasn’t it?
She smiled.
The wain jounced again, leaning wildly to one side as the wheel feel into a rut in the path.
This time, Taliesimon slid her feet with the motion and managed to stay standing.
Her grin broadened.

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Cuularan was large. Easily the biggest place Taliesimon had ever seen.
Like most of the Free States, Cuularan had no fence, no walls, and no gate. The forest had been cleared for a full league around the outbuildings— to aid in defense, she supposed —and a three-span wide stream cut through the center of town.
Arching her back and neck, Taliesimon counted as many of the brick, stucco, wood, and stone buildings as she could. When she was young, she had realized with delight that she could count beyond ten by using her fingers multiple times. All she had to do was use a raised finger to denote each repetition of ten.
She used the trick now, and added a raised two within her soft, doeskin boots when she ran out of fingers.
At two-hundred she stopped, being out of tricks to help her count higher, and marveled. These were only the buildings she could see from out outskirts, which was obviously only a small part of the total within. Nevermind that there were many more that she didn’t have an accurate way to count!
Woodcutters, mills, storefronts, inns, taverns, guard towers, gem cutters, tanners, bone shapers, coopers, wainwrights, this place had everything!
“Papa, where do you think the testing grounds will be this year?”
“Same as always.”
She chewed her lip nervously.
“Don’t worry, Taly,” Father said without looking back at her. “I’ll get you there. As soon as we unload these wine casks at the Birdsong Inn, We’ll head that way.”
She nodded. It seemed silly, nodding when his back was to her. But she knew that somehow he knew she’d nodded. Somehow, Father always seemed to know. A part of her suspected he knew everything.
Ahead, the road seemed to level out and the usual ruts in the road vanished.
Why don’t they keep the ruts out on the whole road? she wondered. Surely, that would make the trip into town far more pleasant for everyone.
Without warning, the wain’s wheels hit… something. Something hard and unyielding. The wain rose in a high bounce and Taliesimon pitched forward. The back of Papa’s bench flew up toward her with sickening speed and bashed her in the face.
Her cheeks felt wet. She rolled over and looked up into the bright midday sun. Her eyes burned with moisture.
Father’s and Jalaisen’s faces broke her view of crimson Kaustere. Concern showed in their eyes, but though their lips moved, no sound penetrated the high, sharp ringing in her ears.
Did I black out? she wondered.
She didn’t know how to tell if she had or not. She hadn’t dreamed. She hadn’t seen blackness overshadow her sight. She remembered her fall and even the impact— she winced at the memory. It was similar to being struck with a shield or the flat of a wooden blade.
Now, however, her face just felt numb.
She reached up to feel her cheeks, chin and nose. Her fingers touched wetness and cold flesh— was her nose crooked now? —but it was as though she were touching someone else’s face. The flesh had no sensation at all.
She couldn’t help thinking it was a bad sign.
Father and Jalaisen looked worried, their expressions drawn.
“Father,” she tried to say, though she couldn’t hear her own voice over the ringing in her ears either, so she was not at all certain she was speaking at all. “I can’t hear you. But I think I’m okay. My face feels numb.”

 

 

CHAPTER TWO

Quillliaurran looked up from his meal of blood oranges, wild carrots, and diamondwood bark. Sindorriaunna was always the first to make sport of him for eating the bark, as she was doing now, but he knew it to be great for adding sparkle to the scales.
“I know you are only trying to steer me toward better health. But truly, the bark is the most nutritious part of the meal.”
Sindor scoffed. “What you need, my dear clutch-mate, are eighteen or twenty good haunches of venison. That would sharpen those teeth and claws right up and add a brilliant sheen to those purple scales.”
“And yet,” he said placidly. “My scales sparkle more than yours do.”
She scowled. “What would you know,” she muttered.
Quill beamed at her, a grin splitting his snout.
“Truly,” she said as a purple streak flashed seemingly from nowhere to strike the side of his head with an audible crack which spun his head down to one side. “You must learn to be less trusting, less kind. This world will eat you alive if you don’t learn this lesson.”
Quill spit deep violet blood from his mouth to splatter the rocks near Sindor’s paws. “Thank you for the lesson.”
The larger wyrm nodded to him and turned away, stalking into the deeper forst. A few paces before disappearing from his sight, she turned her head, twisting around to watch him. “I almost forgot, you have been commanded to take audience with the Underlord today at midday.”
“B-b-but,” he spluttered. “But that’s less than an hour from now! And the Underlord is all the way across the strait on Thorutia!”
“Then you’d better hurry,” she said sweetly.
Quill opened his mouth to argue further, but the glare she shot him made him close it again. He nodded as he recalled who it was he was dealing with.
While it was true that sometimes Sindorriaunna could be reasoned with or persuaded, the Underlord was another matter. The enormous malachite wyrm who ruled Thorutia in the Overlord’s name could not be persuaded. She could not be reasoned with. That one lived in a reality all her own, in which anything she desired was hers and all things she opposed were punishable by death.
“Do you know what it’s about?” he called belatedly, after Sindor had disappeared into the woods.
“Not sure,” her voice came back on the wind. “Might have been something about your bonding.”
“What?” Quill breathed. “Bonding?”
What could it possibly have to do with my bonding? he thought. I’m still far too young to be bonded. What use would I be in the union?
Quillliaurran shook his head violently, to clear the questions. It was only partially successful.
He dove back into his meal and gulped down the last of it in three large bites. There was no more time to dally, he knew. While it wasn’t a long flight across the strait, it was long enough that his arriving on time was still far from assured.
He wiped a thin stream of blood orange juice from his jaw and leaped into the air, snapping his wings out at the zenith of his leap. With several thrusts of his wings, he climbed to cruising altitude.
Even after seeing it hundreds of times, Quill was still in awe of the beauty of the landscape below. The trees of the Verdant Forest were eternally green and blanketed the hills with thicker foliage than seemed possible, especially for a wold so recently out of a years-long winter.
Seasons didn’t seem to affect the Verdant Forest like it did other forests, though. Even with half a wingspan of snow covering the land, the Verdant forest had been thick and green.
A short distance ahead, a flight of blackbirds broke from the cover of the trees and raced away from quill in all directions.
He laughed heartily. I’m not going to hurt you, little birds. Other dragons may choose to make a tender morsel of you, but not me.
In some places, the trees ended less than a wingspan from the eastern shore. The treeline zigged and zagged up and down the coast. The one consistency, however, was that by the time one was a wingspan past the treeline into the woods, the density of the trees became overwhelming.
Once he passed the beach, Quill dipped lower in his flight. Ordinarily, he didn’t enjoy flight any more than he did walking. It was boring and tiring. well, except for the majestic view over the Verdant Forest. That was an experience all it’s own, but could be done without the effort of traveling in flight.
Sea spray, though. That could only be felt in flight. Certainly, one could catch the occasional spray hovering over the water, but the constant spray of droplets in his face? That could only be felt with traveling over the ocean at high speed while less than a wingspan above the surface of the water, where the waves would almost touch him.
Sea spray in the face was the ultimate feeling. Sometimes, when the waves would crash just the right way, instead of droplets, the spray would come up as a fine mist. That was the best. The tiny droplets making up the mist could get under his scales to touch the hot flesh beneath, cooling it just a bit.
Thinking of it made him tingle with anticipation and he dropped lower toward the water.
Almost immediately, the droplets sprayed upward to splash on his belly and underjaw. He shivered with pleasure at the sensation. The droplets cooled the heat in his scales and almost… tickled.
Tickled wasn’t quite the right description of the sensation, but Quill could come up with nothing more accurate.
After several minutes, a tall wave came up to just graze his lazily hanging rear claws and he grinned in anticipation.
An instant later, when the wave crashed back to the surface of the water, a spray of mist flew up just in time to envelop the lowest tenth of his tail. He squirmed with the pleasure of it.
Okay, that’s enough, he thought after a minute. Time to fly like the wind. I need to be standing in front of the Underlord by the stroke of midday.
Rising higher, Quill pumped his wings harder and faster. To the very edge of his endurance, he pumped his wings faster and faster.
It wasn’t that he was afraid of the Underlord, exactly. It was only that he preferred not to face the consequences of failing to obey her.

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